Monday, June 6, 2016

Lee Donghyang /Final Presentation/ Wed 34

Here's my link.
 
https://youtu.be/uMcwupnVlRU
 
 
Speaking Feedback
Date: 2016-06-06
Speaker: Lee Donghyang (201502272)
Evaluator: Lee Donghyang (201502272) Self Evaluation
Title: Survey about drinking
 
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
While giving the speech, I tried to improve my weakness from the mid-term presentation that it was fill-in-blank speech. So I tried to memorize it and make the speech smooth. The PPT was also simple and easy to understand. I made an eye-contact with audiences to deliver the speech correctly and to make them understand. 
 
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? 
Well, some of them surprised when they saw the result of the survey. They are all familliar with my speech subject. So they understood easily and quickly. 

 
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? 
I used Powerpoint to show the result of the survey but I was afraid that it might be boring so I made it by putting some picture, change color of the letters, etc. Also, I tried not to use the memos while doing the presentation and give an eye-contact too. 

4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
I spoke clear and slow enough that audiences could follow and hear my speech, in my opinion. At first, I did it so fast and it caused that the audiences couldn't follow me. So I slow down a bit and spoke audibly.
 
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? 
Yes. My speech begins with few warm-up questions to the audiences about drinking. Then, I continued with the result of the survey. Lastly, I concluded by giving them a warning that it is harmful for our health if we drink too much. 

 
6. Please comment on the speaker's use of notes/eye contact. 
I honestly had looked at my notes sometimes. However, I did better that the mid-term presentation. I also tried to make many eye-contact with the audiences.

7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? 
I should collect more opinions from other students and other ages to make my survey reliable. 
 
8. What did you like about the presentation? 
While I was doing my survey, it was interesting and all the repliers were interested in this topic too. Since it was a topic that everyone is interested, the presentation wasn't boring at all, in my opinion.

2 comments:

  1. 1. What strong points does the speaker have?

    Her calm voice delivers contents well.

    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?

    The subject is quite straightforward.

    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?

    Yes. She picked questions that a lot of people might wonder.

    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?

    Yes. Loud and clear.

    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?

    Yes. Any kind of soju is great if you don’t drink ‘em too much,

    6. Please comment on the speaker's use of notes/eye contact.

    She looked at each listener and the ppt in balance..

    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?

    His ppt was fine. But a little bit short. It could have been better with more information.

    8. What did you like about the presentation?

    Interesting topic. She made good and special presentation out of normal soju.

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  2. Speaking Feedback
    Date : 2016.06.14
    Speaker: Donghyang Lee
    Evaluator: Gitae Shin
    Title : survey about drinking
    1. What strong points does the speaker have? 
    She used questions well to draw attention.
    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? 
    She asked questions to her audiences at the beginning and explained the subject she chose. Easy to follow!
    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? 
    Her visual aid was well-made and the content of the presentation was well-organized.
    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
    Considering the distance between speaker and audience, her voice was clear and big enough.
    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? 
    I could see the opening, body, and conclusion.
    6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
    I think she gave pretty good eye contacts to her audiences.
    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
    It would be better if she had presented it little bit longer and with vivid voice.
    8. What did you like about the presentation?
    Her questions at the beginning and memorable remark before ending it.

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