Saturday, June 4, 2016

Hyeonji Lee/ Final Presentation on Unit 4 / WED 56

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UuLMGdSAW9o

 

Date : 2016.06.04
Speaker: Lee Hyeonji

Evaluator: Lee Hyeonji(Self Evaluation)
Title : About My Presentation.

1. What strong points does the speaker have?

The speaker continued to emphasize the importance of the presentation's topic and added some scientific prooves as supporting detail.

2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
The speaker provided some simple visual effects and information in order to make the audience get to know the speech subject.


3.
Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?

Yes. The speaker didn't memorize the whole script, but the speaker knew what she had to say and give a gesture in right time.

4.
Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?

Yes. After I check the video result, I found that the speaker talked with clear voice which made the audience understand the presentation appropriately.

5.
Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?

Yes. In opening, the speaker extended a greeting to the audience and gave a question,and there were 4 bodies and each very front of the body had clues like 'to begin with', 'next','now we can move on to'. In conclusion, the speaker emphasized the importance of the topic again and thanked to the audience.

6.
Please comment on the speaker's use of notes/eye contact.

Since the speaker was well informed of the content, the speaker used notes rarely and eye contacted with audience when the speaker is not using note.

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What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?

The speaker didn't move. If the speaker tried to walk around and communicated with audience, it would look much better.

8.
What did you like about the presentation?

 

 

Since it was the second presentation recording project, I thought I would go over it without hesitating. However, I was more nervous than the last presentation because I got some result already and because of that, I had some uncomfortable feeling about that. The result is not perfect. But, I've improved a lot, in my opinion. Last time, my pronounciation was not appropriate and my speech was very tensed. But in this presentation, my speed of speech was stablized and pronounciation. I think this is my best effort. And the topic of the content was funny and unique. The audiences said my topic was very interesting, too. I finished this presentation with satisfaction and it was great experience.

1 comment:

  1. Speaking Feedback
    Date :16.06.05
    Speaker:Lee Hyeonji
    Evaluator:Bae Jooyoung
    Title :4 stages in Buffet

    1. What strong points does the speaker have?
    She did pick the interesting topic. It was really good to listen about the stages for eating in Buffet because I felt always eating in Buffet is waste of money for me.

    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
    She put the slide telling the speech subject to show the audiences the topic.
    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
    Sure. Because it arose sympathy, she did well on reflection of her work.
    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
    Yes. She spoke in loud and brave voice!!
    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
    Yes. I was an audience of her speech AND it was really good to know where are we and what are we hearing because she always tried to give conjunctions.
    6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
    She memorized all of the script but she had to look at her notes. Actually I knew that she was so nervous because her cell phone didn't work for recording so she had to borrow my cell phone for it. Even though she missed her pace, she tried hard on it seeing both note and audiences.
    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
    Memorizing is required..! But I knew she did memorize before video recording..
    8. What did you like about the presentation?
    It was the most interesting topic ever! I love her voice and the well organized contents of her presentation. Thank you~

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