Speaking Feedback
Date : 2016.6.3
Speaker: SeonJoo An
Evaluator: SeonJoo An (Self-evaluation)
Title : Drinking Water
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
I think my strong points in the presentation were that the whole presentation was well-organized and my voice was clear and loud enough for the audiences to understand easily.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
I think the audiences were able to learn how much drinking water is beneficial for our body and if one doesn't enjoy drinking water, he or she was able to find out what they can drink instead of water. In addition, they were able to find out how to calculate the amount of water that fits to their own body.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
I prepared for the presentation for a long time by making visual aids and keep practicing on speaking, the overall presentation flowed really smoothly and it reflected adequate preparation.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes. I think I spoke clear and loud enough for the audiences to understand the presentation.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes. My presentation began with some opening questions in order to have some interactions with the audiences. The body part of the presentation was including advantages of drinking water, substitutions of water, and the proper amount of water that people should drink daily. For the conclusion part, I summarized the main points and ended the presentation with a quote.
6. Please comment on the speaker's use of notes/eye contact.
I did not memorized the whole speech since I thought that it would affect the flow of whole presentation so I used note cards during the presentation. I think the presentation could have been better if I did not look at the notes too often. However, I made some good eye contacts with the audiences during the presentation.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
I could have looked at the notes less and that would make the presentation better.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I think my presentation was clearly organized well and it gave interesting facts about how much drinking water is important for human bodies. Also, after delivering some advantages, I suggested some other ways that people can get healthier if one cannot drink water. The whole presentation was clear and interesting.
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate :19.06.05
Speaker:An Seonjoo
Evaluator:Bae Jooyoung
Title :Drinking water
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
She strongly suggested to drink water. It was really helpful and well-organized presentation.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
She show us ppt slide to show what is her topic and we easily get it because of the pictures.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Sure. She did researchs for this presentation a lot because she neended it. It was adequate figures and numbers to announce.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes she was in full confident and I really liked her clear pronunciation.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes she really made well-organized presentation and put proper conjunctions for noticing.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
It was her weakness because she didn't actually have eye contact with the audiences. It might be little hard to remember since she prepared a lot. Because she was holding her script in two hands, she coudln't have gestures neither.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
Memorizing all of it and having emphasis with changing volume because although it was great topic and contents, it was hard to concentrate due to academic topic. It might be much better to improve that part and not to be in kind of fear or nervousness next time:)
8. What did you like about the presentation?
THE TOPIC! It was interesting topic and really useful.