https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gph0_bwQRqk
Date : 2016.06.03
Speaker: Bae Jooyoung
Evaluator: Myself!
Title : Time and effot preparing for the test
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
I am giving many survey results to give information about how much time and effort the students spend preparing for the test and why they study. By well formed survey, I have strong argument about the reason why students actually study.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
I first expressed my survey topic and why I performed this survey clearly. So the audiences noticed the speech subject well.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Sure. Because my presentation was 'survey' presentation, I try to reflect survey results and consideration of results in order! I performed survey with many students to generalize the conclusion for adequate reason not to be exaggerated.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes I did. I spoke as loud as I can in proper volume not to disturb audiences! :) I listened to this video and checked it immediately.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes. I opened the presentation with the question, body parts with conjunctions and conclusion with 'to sum up'.
6. Please comment on the speaker's use of notes/eye contact.
Actually, I wanted to check the printed ppt paper but it looks like I am reading the script! SO SAD.. I try to look my audiences and camera headed me both because the video watchers are also audiences for my speech I thought:)
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
It was kind of embarrassing so it was hard to make eye contact with my audiences. It would be much better if I do that!
8. What did you like about the presentation?
Personally, concluding part was the most elaborative and painstaking! I spend most time of preparing on this part because I thought Unit 3, survey presentation, requires speakers opinion and interpretation about results of survey precisely. So I tried searching for the social phenomenon! I am happy about the output of my suffering. Also I felt like my presentation is much getting better than the past. For instance, I didn't use gestures, using pauses for attention and controling high and low of the voice for emphasis. Since I saw those kinds of weakness improve a lot, I love my presentation and I am satisfied with it fully:)
Speaking Feedback
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Speaker: Jooyoung Bae
Evaluator: Jeonghee Lee
Title : Time and Effort Preparing for the test
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
Jooyoung’s strong points are her speed and voice. She spoke in clear and loud voice and her speed was very steady. Also, I think she paused appropriately and she was confident. I was one of her audiences and I could understand the presentation better thanks to her steady speed, loud enough voice and pausing.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
Even though there were quite a lot of contents, I think she conveyed them pretty well. I could understand how her survey went, her survey questions, survey results and her interpretation of the results.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes, I think her speech reflected adequate preparation. I could understand the results of her survey and her ppt slides that she prepared for the presentation also helped me to understand better.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes, she did. I think she talked confidently with clear and audible voice. I believe this is her strong points.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes, she did. She asked a question at the opening and explained about her survey at the body. She summarized her presentation at the conclusion.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
Because there were lots of contents in her presentation, she had to use the notes. However, I think it would’ve been better if she used her notes less. Also, I think she need more eye contacts with her audiences. She mostly looked at the camera
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
In my opinion, I think she used her notes too much. Also, I think it would’ve been better if she just hold the notes rather than putting them on the desk. That’s because sometimes, putting the notes on the desk might give the audiences the impression that the presenter is reading a script.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I really liked her steady speed and appropriate pauses because they definitely helped me to understand her presentation, even though her presentation had a lot of contents.