Date : 2016.06.05
Speaker: Lee ji young
Evaluator: Lee ji young (Self Evaluation)
Title : Kumari in Nepal
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
at the begining i show the photos which represent their characteristic well.
and make them guess about who she is. it may be attract their attention.
also I think my intonation and voice volume was adequate. And I try to do many eyecontact.
I used many visual materials to help audience understand easily. and memorized almost every sentence.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
I think they god to know the speech well. after the presentation I said if you have any question feel free to ask me
but no one ask me. and also during the speech they seem to follow me well. I used many visual materials so it would be easy to understand ..
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
yes i Prepared it alot so when I speek, I speek naturally. And for making presentation I spent almost 4 hours but i think it works.
because it make my presentation more interesting and easy to understand.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
yes after the presentation, the audience said they can hear me well.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
yes. I put my effort a lot on preparing my script because i want to make my presentation to be organized.
in the opening i make them to guess about kumari. and in the body i introduce about three steps of kumari selecting procedure. (32 criteria for appearance-> courage->prophecy) and also introduce about their duty and for the conclusion I told them although there are conflicting viewpoints about kumari, she is still a goddess worshiped by many nepal people.
6. Please comment on the speaker's use of notes/eye contact.
I tried to memorize all the script, and i almost memorized all thing. so i rarely look the script and did many eyecontact more than my last presentation.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
if i'm not nervous it would be better. i think i couldn't do well compare to my preparation.
and also I should move! I was too nervous so couldn't use many nonverbal language.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I think it is pretty good. I review my last presentation and tried to back up my presentation. I am more confident than before.
and also power point was much better( i realized that power point is really powerful material, so this time I put an effort alot to make it)
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ReplyDeleteDate : 16.06.13
Speaker: Lee Jiyoung
Evaluator: Younghun Shin
Title : Kumari in Nepal
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
She showed the Kumari clearly by using visual aids. She used many images.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
Audiences probably are not familiar to Kumari. But, she clarified the subject well to the audiences, so it was easy to understand.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes. she made a visual aids with many images to explain Kumari for the audience.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
At that spot, I think she talked clearly and audibly, but in the video, her voice echoed and hard to hear.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes. She first asked a question to audiences, and talked about apearance ,courage, and prophecy at body part in a logical order. In conclusion, she delivered het thought clearly.
6. Please comment on the speaker's use of notes/eye contact.
She tried not to use notes, and she often did an eye contact and sometimes looks at the screen.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
I think she could use the microphone to speak more loudly. She should speak more slightly fast.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I have never heard about her topic. So, her topic was interesting because I could know about Kumari. I think she did a hard research. Great job