Speaking Feedback
Date : 16.06.05
Speaker: Yugyeong An
Evaluator: Yugyeong An(Self-evaluation)
Title : About my presentation
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
Speaker emphasized own motive to take the survey.
Speaker showed survey result and own thought about subject clearly.
Speaker gave a question to audiences to drag audiences' participations out.
Speaker used graphs to enhance audiences' understanding.
Speaker made several eye contacts with audiences and did gestures.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
Audiences said the speech I gave to them was very clear.
After the presentation, we talked about surprising results about 'Eating Alone'.
Audiences said that they were very scared of eating alone.
But after seeing my presentation, they became more optimistic of eating alone.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes. I made my survey questions and papers for a long time. With my survey papers, I surveyed 10 people. After surveying, I tried hard to analyze my survey results and make my informative PPT. I practiced this presentation almost 10 times! I think my presentation reflects adequate preparation.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes. But I think speaker talked clearly but my voice was a little bit small.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes. In opening, I talked my motive to do this survey. In body, I showed survey results with clear graphs. In conclusion, I presented about analysis of results and my thought of it.
6. Please comment on the speaker's use of notes/eye contact.
In this time, I didn't use notes. Also, as you can see, I made several eye contacts with audiences to check their degree of understanding.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
I think I could use the tone change to emphasize strongly about survey.
Also, I could raise my voice to make it more audible.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I liked my survey topic and the order of presentation. My survey topic was enough to attract audiences' interest! (I got praised of this by my audiences.) My survey questions were well ordered and organized. Also, I think I did a good analysis about my survey results. On the other hand, I was more comfortable because of absense of note! It was very surprising. I thought if there was no note, I would be more nervous. But it was easier to do my presentation. I think this presentation was more relaxed because I took it easy. Thanks for professor's advice!
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate : 16.06.13
Speaker: Yugyeong An
Evaluator: Younghun Shin
Title :
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
She took the survey herself. Sphe showed content clearly by using visual aids. She asked a question to get audiences's attention.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
She clarified the subject to the audiences, and eating alone is a subject that many students experience this days.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes. she made a survey and visual aids for the audience.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
she talked clearly but her voice echoed and was small.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes. She talked about motivation ,survey, graphs, analysis in a logical order.
6. Please comment on the speaker's use of notes/eye contact.
She seems not to use notes, but as a result, she often looks at the screen, not the audiences.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
I think she could use the microphone to speak more loudly.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I liked her survey topic. Her survey topic was interesting because I was recently concerned about eating alone. I think she did a good survey and analysis. Great job!
ReplyDelete1. What strong points does the speaker have?
She speaks very clear and have confidence on herself.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
I guess this is very popular topic for Korea. Good for Korean audiences.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
she talked clearly but her voice is very small. She need bigger voice to take attraction of audiences.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes. I also like that she asked questions related with it.
6. Please comment on the speaker's use of notes/eye contact.
Not too much eye contact. The audiences also very far and looking not too interested.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
Exactly needs more eye contact and need to take attraction on her topic from audiences.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I liked her survey topic.