Friday, June 3, 2016

Jinhyeok Kim / Unit 04 Presentation / Wed 56

 
This is my presentation. It's about how to look good in photos.
Hope this short presentation to be "informative" for you guys.

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  2. Speaking Feedback
    Date: 2016-06-06
    Speaker: Jiyoung Lee
    Evaluator: Jinhyeok Kim
    Title: How to look good in photos

    1. What strong points does the speaker have?
    The topic was interesting and his presentation was really fun. he used his own pictures and it was interesting and make me focused

    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
    I could understand well because he used many visual materials

    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
    Yes.He didn't nervous and speak very fluently. He pictured his own photoes and it seems to me that he prepared alot

    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
    Yes. his intonation, voice volume was good.

    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
    Yes. his presentation was fun and also very organized. He introduced four methods to prevent the poor picture
    with the adequete examples

    6. Please comment on the speaker's use of notes/eye contact.
    He didn't use notes much and did eye contacts a lot.

    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
    for me the presentation was perfect :)

    8. What did you like about the presentation?
    in the conclusion, he acted like he picture together.it was very fun and also related to the main idea

    June 6, 2016 at 6:10 PM

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  3. Speaking Feedback
    Date: 2016-06-06
    Speaker: Kim Jin Hyeok
    Evaluator: Kim Eun Jin
    Title: How to Look Good in Photos

    1. What strong points does the speaker have?
    : His confidence and his ability to make audience feel comfortable. His presentation seems interactive and it’s really nice.

    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
    : It seems that audience understands what he’s saying according to the video.

    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
    : Yes. It seems that he memorized entire script of his presentation, and he knows when to pass the slide of his power point. I can see he practiced a lot.

    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
    : Definitely.

    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
    : Yes. His speech has clear opening, body, and conclusion. I like his conclusion part.

    6. Please comment on the speaker's use of notes/eye contact.
    : Even though he didn’t use the notes, he made eye contact enough with audience.

    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
    : He prepared visual aid unlike previous presentation, and it seems that it helped to make his presentation interesting and interactive.

    8. What did you like about the presentation?
    :Interactive parts. I can see his audience was enjoying his presentation.

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