Here is my link.
https://youtu.be/6hJ9zp7ztdQ
Speaking Feedback
Date: 2016-06-05
Speaker: Chaeeun Lee (201502684)
Evaluator: Chaeeun Lee (201502684)
Title: Reality of Campus Couple
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
The PPT was designed properly. It helped the audience get the topic easily. Also, I memorized the script. The survey had 70 respondents so it was reliable. I made the characters to help the audience understand my speech.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
I tried to contain as many and diverse questions as I could. I designed it to have ideas before being a CC, when they were CC, and after being a CC. Also I delivered the advantage and disadvantage of being a CC. I think I delivered the things I prepared.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
As I said, I conducted a survey to 70 people. Also I made a simple story line to make the speech more interesting. Making the PPT with so many survey results was difficult but I did it as well. Also I had a quotation at the end of the presentation to make the audience effectively understand my message.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
I spoke in moderate volume. Also I used my hands to deliver a better speech.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes. The part with survey results was the body and after I said "This is the end of Camp and Camie's story." I delivered my conclusion.
6. Please comment on the speaker's use of notes/eye contact.
I didn't look at the notes and tried to make as many eye-contact as possible.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
Next time it would be better if I contain more questions.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I liked that it had a story. Also that I memorized my script. It was a topic that considered the audience's interest. The PPT matched the topic. It also had a quotation. The survey had many respondents.
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate: 2016-06-05
Speaker: Chaeeun Lee
Evaluator: Yugyeong An
Title: Reality of Campus Couple
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
Her presentation had a lovely story. So I can feel more interested and excited!
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
I could understand what she would like to tell us.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes. Especially, I was very surprised of her PPT. Also her survey results and her analysis were very good.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes. But it would be better if she raised her voice little more.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes. But if there are questions or motive to do this survey in opening, it will be more clear!
6. Please comment on the speaker's use of notes/eye contact.
She didn't use notes and she tried to make eye contacts with people.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
As I said before, it will be better to make question or tell motive of doing survey in opening. And it will be nice to raise her voice little more!
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I was very interested about her story of presentation. And PPT was organized well!
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
ReplyDeleteHer intonation and pronunciation are neat enough for her listeners to well understand her presentation. Furthermore, the visual materials she uses are high quality.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
Since every condition that a decent presentation requires are fulfilled, I had no difficulties catching up on it as a listener.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes, it did. Her presentation skills and the quality of the visuals she has prepared directly prove her degree of preparation.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes, she did. The speed and clearness of her delivery were excellent.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes, it did. It is a well organized presentation.
6. Please comment on the speaker's use of notes/eye contact.
She seems to know what she has to deliver to her audiences. Her eye contact was also natural.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
It would have been even better if she spoke a little bit louder.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I liked every aspect of it since flaws can hardly be found.
Speaker: Chaeeun Lee
ReplyDeleteEvaluator : Donghyang Lee
Title: Reality of Campus Couple
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
First of all, her voice was clear and it was easy to hear. Secondly, the visual aids is very simple and and see it clearly too. She made a speech kind of storytelling so it wasn't boring at all.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
Audiences may be fimiliar with the word Campus Couple so they might understanded the topic well and easily.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
It can be seen that she had prepare for the speech and she is confident to give a speech to audiences. By watching her giving a speech, it made me felt exciting and I enjoyed the presentation.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes, she spoke in moderate volume and also her pronounciation is clear too.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes. it can be seen clearly where is the opening, body, and conclusion. She ends up like it is the end of the story.
6. Please comment on the speaker's use of notes/eye contact.
She made some eye-contacts and she also used hand gestures to deliver the infomation definitely.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
She would have give better speech if she had more questions and if she spoke a little louder.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I liked the whole presentation because it was like telling a story to make the audiences understand easily. It acually help me understand quickly about the survey. Also, I liked that she concluded the speech by saying " This is the end of Camp and Camey's story.."
Well done..!