Self Feedback 1. What strong points does the speaker have? clear pronunciation, eye contact, final message
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? I reserched about the space trip via books and intiernet. I also asked to a student who is majoring in that field. And I used a powerpoint to show some pictures which can helep the lesters easily understand.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Well, if I could be more louder in voice, it would be better.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? The volume of the vedio is too small. But I think I did well in front of the listers.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? yes. In the opening, I introduces the moon trip in the future, and in the body I talked about the theory of relativity and space trip to the further universe, and at the end I gave a message.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. I didn't see any notes. I memorized all the scrips I wrote. I tried to see all the listers one by one. It was not bad, but I need more improvement on that.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? using microphone can be a good way to make sure my speech is well delevered. And more natural gestures.
Speaking Feedback Date: 2016.06.12 Speaker: Oh mi young Evaluator: Chaeeun Lee (201502684) Title : IS ‘SPACE TRIP’ GOOD FOR HUMAN?
1. What strong points does the speaker have? She had clear voice, pronunciation and intonation. Also her story made me concentrate more.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? I was not even interested in Science or space trip but she explained them well. This presentation also included ‘Theory of Relativity’, which could make the audience get lost, she used it very well in her story and also made me understand the theory with simple and easy examples.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? Yes. She memorized all the script and the story was organized. I liked her PPT as well.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Yes. Although she didn’t shout or yell to the audience, the voice was clear and nice.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? Yes. She had all three.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. She didn’t use any notes and she made natural eye contact.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? It would have been better if she was more relaxed. She seemed to be nervous. However, everything except that was great!
8. What did you like about the presentation? I liked her well prepared story line. Also her pronunciation and clear voice helped me understand her message better.
Self Feedback
ReplyDelete1. What strong points does the speaker have?
clear pronunciation, eye contact, final message
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
I reserched about the space trip via books and intiernet. I also asked to a student who is majoring in that field. And I used a powerpoint to show some pictures which can helep the lesters easily understand.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Well, if I could be more louder in voice, it would be better.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
The volume of the vedio is too small. But I think I did well in front of the listers.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
yes. In the opening, I introduces the moon trip in the future, and in the body I talked about the theory of relativity and space trip to the further universe, and at the end I gave a message.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
I didn't see any notes. I memorized all the scrips I wrote.
I tried to see all the listers one by one. It was not bad, but I need more improvement on that.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
using microphone can be a good way to make sure my speech is well delevered.
And more natural gestures.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate: 2016.06.12
Speaker: Oh mi young
Evaluator: Chaeeun Lee (201502684)
Title : IS ‘SPACE TRIP’ GOOD FOR HUMAN?
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
She had clear voice, pronunciation and intonation. Also her story made me concentrate more.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
I was not even interested in Science or space trip but she explained them well. This presentation also included ‘Theory of Relativity’, which could make the audience get lost, she used it very well in her story and also made me understand the theory with simple and easy examples.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes. She memorized all the script and the story was organized. I liked her PPT as well.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes. Although she didn’t shout or yell to the audience, the voice was clear and nice.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes. She had all three.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
She didn’t use any notes and she made natural eye contact.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
It would have been better if she was more relaxed. She seemed to be nervous. However, everything except that was great!
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I liked her well prepared story line. Also her pronunciation and clear voice helped me understand her message better.