Speaking Feedback
Date : 2016-06-05
Speaker: Seobin Lee
Evaluator: Seobin Lee
Title : "How to find the personal color"
This is the link of my presentation!
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=RoYDg_hbh_E
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
The speaker emphasizes the topic and important part of it.
The speaker needs to talk understandable and talkative.
The speaker always sees audiences
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
The speaker provided some visuals for understanding and showed examples and information to make the audience get to know what speaker wanted to say.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes. The speaker prepared a lot and memorized almost everything instead of little mistake or detail. And the speaker used gestures for attention of the audience.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes. The audience told me my presentation was understandable and my voice was clear and loud appropriately to listen.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes. In the opening, the speaker said hello to the audience and gave a question for begin. There are backgrounds of the presentation, examples, explanation, and the process. In the conclusion, the speaker emphasized the importance of the topic and recommended to do this. And at last, the speaker thanked to the audience.
6. Please comment on the speaker's use of notes/eye contact.
The speaker continued to do eye contact with the audience.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
When the speaker was presenting, the gesture was little bit weird. If the speaker did the presentation more comfortable, it would be better.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
When I got my presentation feedback from professor, I was surprised with the feedback related to speed. I thought speed of the presentation is the thing for understanding. I am not the native speaker and the audience also not the native. So I spoke little slow and clear. But after the feedback, at this presentation I tried to do the presentation more fluently. I prepared it a lot and practiced again and again. So, in this presentation I did it more active and stable. And this time I prepared the visuals for understanding and I practiced with these visuals. Finally, at the real presentation in front of the audience I did it well. I was nervous so much as I did the presentation for the midterm, but I overcome that nervous and I did it. I was proud of myself and thank you for the professor to give me this opportunity. I was great and unforgettable experience.
Date : 2016-06-10
ReplyDeleteSpeaker: Seobin Lee
Evaluator: Lee, Jun Ki
Title : "How to find the personal color"
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
The topic itself was very interesting and speaker made good eye contact.
Speaking speed was very comfortable and the visual aids well very catchy.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
She used a lot of visual materials to impress audience, and it also helped audience to understand the topic
She used expressions and vocabularies that helped understand the fashion related topic such as warm, cool, summer and winter.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Speaker memorized all the speech and used no note. As a result good eye contact and interaction was made.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
The voice was very audible, and most of the presentation was very cleary spoken
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Presentation had each parts including hook which was a question. I could see that it was organized.
6. Please comment on the speaker's use of notes/eye contact.
No notes were used, and perfect eye contact was made.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
It would have been better if she was little more confident. Hand gestures were unnatural.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
It was very intriguing topic, and visual aids proved her effort on presentation.
Talking speed of speaker was comfortable to hear.
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
ReplyDeleteHer intonation, pronunciation and speed are decent enough to make every listeners follow without difficulties.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
I became highly interested with her presentation since she used various visual materials and the contents of the presentation itself were detailed.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
From her fluency and the quality of her visuals, it is obvious that she prepared thoroughly.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Her voice tone, speed, pronunciation and intonation were all highly clear and audible.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes, it did. The sequence of the presentation was well structured. It was a well organized presentation.
6. Please comment on the speaker's use of notes/eye contact.
She was confident enough to discard notes from her presentation. Her eye contacts were good enough to make sure every audience was understanding.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
It would have been even better if she could use variety of gestures.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
Though I favored most parts of it, what I truly want to praise is that it was much improved compared to the last one. I deeply respect the efforts she made.