Monday, June 6, 2016

Kim Yoon Jae Presentation_Final_Unit 4

https://youtu.be/HA03zQzCMV0

 

Date : June 5th 2016
Speaker: Kim Yoon Jae
Evaluator: Kim Yoon Jae (Self Evaluation)
Title : How to Produce a Song

 

1. What strong points does the speaker have?

 

He keeps on eye-contacting his audiences. His intonation and pronunciation are decent. His contents are detailed.

 

2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?

 

By viewing the visual materials and listening to the explanation, they now have much better knowledge regarding how a song is produced.

 

3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?

 

Yes, it did. I thoroughly analyzed the process I intended to let my audiences know. Furthermore, I absolutely made sure that there is no wrong information in it.

 

4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?

 

Yes, he did. He spoke comparably slowly and fluently that even those who are not used to English can easily understand.

 

5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?

 

Yes, it did. It was definitely organized in a designated order so that everyone could recognize how it goes.

 

6. Please comment on the speaker's use of notes/eye contact.

 

He was well aware of what he wanted to tell the audiences. Hence, he was not in need of extra notes. His eye contact was good enough to make sure everyone was following him.

 

7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?

 

He could have brought some more visual supplements. Also, it might have been better if he could add some more details on the contents of his presentation.

 

8. What did you like about the presentation?

 

I firmly believe that every aspect that a presentation requires was sufficiently included.



4 comments:

  1. 1. What strong points does the speaker have?

    His calm voice delivers contents well. And the process he explained was clear.

    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?

    He explained well about producing songs with appropriate visual aids and simple but precise dictions.

    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?

    Yes. I have zero idea about producing songs but I could understand it well.

    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?

    Yes. Loud and clear. A bit slow which helped audience have some time to process in their head.

    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?

    Yes

    6. Please comment on the speaker's use of notes/eye contact.

    He looked at each listener while he was talking.

    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?

    His ppt was fine. But it had no word that explains the picture or the process that might help audiences understand the content better.

    8. What did you like about the presentation?

    Interesting topic with easy explanation.

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  3. 1. What strong points does the speaker have?

    The topic was very interesting and speaker made good eye contact. And the visual photos were great examples.

    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?

    He had an interesting topic. So it could impress the audience. And he explained really well to help audience to understand the topic
    He spoke very fluently and used expressions and vocabularies that easy to understand about the music industry.

    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?

    Speaker memorized all the speech and used no note. As a result good eye contact and interaction was made.

    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?

    The voice was clear and audible.

    5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?

    Presentation clearly has opening, body and conclusion part and it was organized well.

    6. Please comment on the speaker's use of notes/eye contact.

    No notes and amazing eye contact was made.

    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?

    It would have been better if he express his emotions and emphasize the important part.

    8. What did you like about the presentation?

    It was very hooked topic. Because everyone loves music and really interested in.
    Speaker’s talking speed was comfortable to hear. And I could feel his effort to prepare the presentation.

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  4. I am Seobin LEE(Bella). It does not working with the open ID. :(

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