Sunday, April 17, 2016

SeonJoo An/Unit 1/Wed5-6

https://youtu.be/e1L2nP92u-s

 

 

It was a great experience for me topresent in front of the classmates about the person whom I admire.

By making a video with the presentation that I made, I was able to look back at myself and find out some problems.

Even though I had some experiences of making presentations, it was always a difficult task for me.

After watching the video of myself, I thought that it would be better if I could make various gestures.

Also, when I am presenting for the next time, I want to look more confident.

I wish I could see my development in presentation skills  throughout this course.

 

3 comments:

  1. It was great presentation. I think your pronounciation was great and you're very fluent in English. The speed of the speech was good and visual effect(PPT)was appropriate too. What impressed me most was that you gave the audience the chance to ask a question to you. I think it was very useful. Thank you.

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  2. Speaking Feedback
    Date : 2016-04-22
    Speaker: Seonjoo An
    Evaluator: Shin Younghun
    Title : Helen Keller

    You are so fluent in English, and you seem to be confident while speaking. Also, you prepared not only note card, but also a visual aids! It was good that you spoke clearly in a loud voice. The speech had a introduction of the sequence of the content that you will tell about. Especially the part when you asked about background info to the audience was good. You did many eye contacts, but it seemed to me that you looked the note card quite often, and I do this too. It was good that you used many gestures. It will be better if you use more formal language, not casual. Great job!

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  3. Speaking Feedback (Self)
    Date: 2016/4/22
    Speaker: SeonJoo An
    Evaluator: SeonJoo An

    1. What strong points does the speaker have?
    I think I have strong points on good and clear pronounciation. Also, I think that I have loud and clear voice in order for the audiences to understand and concentrate on my presentation.
    2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
    I believe that my audiences were able to understand the speech subject fully since I have made the visual aids and also noticed about what things I will be talking about for the presentation.
    3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
    Yes. I spent enough time for preparing the speech my keep revising the scripts in order to deliever the information more effectively. In addition, I prepared clear visual aids for better speech.
    4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audubly?
    Yes, I believe that my voice was clear and loud enough for the audiences to hear.
    5. Did the speech have definite opening, body, and conclusion?
    Yes. I started the presentation with self-introduction and by introducing the topic and information that I will be covering. Also, there were body parts including the lifestory, achievements and the reason why I admire her. For the conclusion, I gave a famous quotation of Helen Keller to deliever the messege of her to the audiences.
    6. Please comment on the speaker's use of notes/eye contacts.
    I think I could have looked at the notecards less. I think I started to look at the note cards more after I got very nervous. However, I think I made good eye contacts with the audiences in order to interact with them.
    7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
    I think I could have reduce the time I look ate the notecards and make various gestures. I will work on these parts in order to show improvements for the next speech.
    8. What did you like about the presentation?
    Overall, I belive that I have done a great job in making an interesting and well-organized speech. Also, my voice and pronounciation were clear enough to catch the attention of the audiences.

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