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I would like to say that if I try to memorize things I just mess it up. Before I tried to memorize things and because of being nervous I lost a competition in a Tv once :( . So I just try to understand and practice on it. I trust people can do good presentation with enough information in confidence. So this time I think I did not feel nervous. After all, the subject is my country. But I wish I could do better job. I would like to try to take more better presentation video but I was sorry to my friends. :)
But I gotta say, that time we made a great team-working in a coffee shop...
Hey I enjoyed watching your presentation. Your presentation had all of the structure and I especially liked how you made good interaction with audience. You succeed in making audiences to pay attention to what you are saying. Also, presentation itself was very smooth, and your eye contact was almost perfect. You seemed pretty comfortable in front of the audiences. Informations were very interesting, and overall presentation was just great!
ReplyDeleteInteresting topic! You sound very confident and it seemed like you know very well about the things that you are going to introduce to your audiences. Your speed was also very good to understand. I think your gestures, like pointing at the pictures on ppt slides, were very effective. Also, you did a great job on eye - contact. However, I think using notes will help you with reducing unnecessary words like, "Um...." or "You know...". Also, I think you should be careful with touching your hair when you are giving a presentation. The audiences' attention might be get disturbed. I really liked your presentation about vacation in Turkey! I wish I could go Turkey and visit the places that you introduced. Great job!
ReplyDeleteInteresting topic! You sound very confident and it seemed like you know very well about the things that you are going to introduce to your audiences. Your speed was also very good to understand. I think your gestures, like pointing at the pictures on ppt slides, were very effective. Also, you did a great job on eye - contact. However, I think using notes will help you with reducing unnecessary words like, "Um...." or "You know...". Also, I think you should be careful with touching your hair when you are giving a presentation. The audiences' attention might be get disturbed. I really liked your presentation about vacation in Turkey! I wish I could go Turkey and visit the places that you introduced. Great job!
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ReplyDeleteDate : April. 21, 2016
Speaker: Sena Sevencan
Evaluator: Jeonghee Lee
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
I think her confident voice, proper speed and gestures like pointing at the pictures on ppt slides were her strong points.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
Thanks to her speed and loud enough voice, I could understand her topic very well. Also, I believe her good eye-contacts with the audiences and a successful interaction made the audiences to understand her presentation well.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
She seemed like she knew very well about the things that she were talking about and made an useful ppt slides which helped the audiences to understand better.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?.
She talked in a very clear voice and her speech was audible.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
She did have opening, body and conclusion but it was hard to notice because she didn't use signpostings.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
She didn't use any notes but she made eye contacts with the audiences really well.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
If she used some notes, I think she would have improved her speech and reduced the use of unnecessary words like 'um~' or 'You know~'.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I really liked her topic about interesting places in Turkey and her interaction with the audiences.