http://youtu.be/qyTkL7_e9fs
It was the first time for me to present in English for 4 minutes. However, it was a great experience!
I didn't prepare powerpoint so I didn't have visual aids.
During the speech, it was very difficult to memorize the writing. I tried to eye contact with my classmates but it was very hard for me.
It a time to know myself by watching video of my own. I hope i'll do it well next time.
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ReplyDeleteDate: 2016.04.22
Speaker: Dong Hyang Lee
Evaluator: Chaeeun Lee (201502684)
Title: Stevie Wonder
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
It was great to watch your video and listen to your story! :)
I really liked your speed of speaking. It sounded calm and organized. Also I was very comfortable while listening to you. Your pronunciation sounded good as well. I could understand almost every words. The vocabulary you used in the speech was adequate. It was not too heavy and not too difficult to understand.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
I knew who 'Stevie Wonder' is but didn't know about his story this much. The part you introduced the story of the song 'Isn't she lovely' and 'Lonely Boy'. It was very touching to know that he overcame his hardships with music.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
I felt that you prepared the presentation well because you conveyed lots of meaningful stories about the topic.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
You sounded very clear and it was nice to understand. You would have performed better, however, if you had spoken up a little bit and give more tones to your speech.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
You had a good opening sentence, also organized body and clear conclusion. They helped me follow your speech well.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
I could see that you tried to make eye contacts with the audiences. Though it would have been better if you memorized your script more. I could see you using the note cards well.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
In my opinion, I think your speech would have been better if you used PPT and a short clip of his music. It would be more interesting I think.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I liked the way you spoke-your speed of speech and pronunciation. Also your presentation was well-organized.
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ReplyDeleteDate :April 23, 2016
Speaker:Lee Dong Hyang
Evaluator:Oh mi young
Title :person who I admire
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
Your pronunciation is so good. And your presentation have a well-organized content.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
You seems like knowing about Stevie Wonder really well. There was a behind story about his song 'Isn't she lovely'.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes. I can see you prepared for the memo pad. But I think you looked at it a lot, probably you were nervous.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes.You used microphone and it was a good choice. I could hear your voice really well. But I don't know if your can speak aloud even without microphone.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes! At the beginning, you started with a question. It was really good. And at the end, you sum up what you talked using a signal 'in conclusion...'.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
You used notes but I think you looked at it a lot. Your eye contact was so good! You looked at the audience properly.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
Maybe you were nervous. Next time if you memorize a lot and practice it, you will be able to use body gesture too.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I like your steady speed and good pronunciation. I can hear you clearly. And the content was really well-organized. I could get a lot of information about Stevie Wonder.
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate :April 23, 2016
Speaker:Lee Dong Hyang
Evaluator:Oh mi young
Title :person who I admire
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
Your pronunciation is so good. And your presentation have a well-organized content.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
You seems like knowing about Stevie Wonder really well. There was a behind story about his song 'Isn't she lovely'.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Yes. I can see you prepared for the memo pad. But I think you looked at it a lot, probably you were nervous.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes.You used microphone and it was a good choice. I could hear your voice really well. But I don't know if your can speak aloud even without microphone.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes! At the beginning, you started with a question. It was really good. And at the end, you sum up what you talked using a signal 'in conclusion...'.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
You used notes but I think you looked at it a lot. Your eye contact was so good! You looked at the audience properly.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
Maybe you were nervous. Next time if you memorize a lot and practice it, you will be able to use body gesture too.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I like your steady speed and good pronunciation. I can hear you clearly. And the content was really well-organized. I could get a lot of information about Stevie Wonder.