Evaluator: Jeonghee Lee I really like your gestures and your calm speech. You also made good eye-contacts with the audiences. I think you are good at pausing and stressing properly. They made your speech more clear and audible. However, I think it would be better if you speak a little, little, little bit faster since you use many pausing, the presentation might sound too slow. You do have opening, body and closing but they are not signposted so it's quite hard to find out. Your opening with a proverb was also interesting. Well done!:D
Speaking Feedback Date :April 23, 2016 Speaker:Hansik Yoon Evaluator: Miyoung Oh Title : Person who I admire
1. What strong points does the speaker have? steady speed, and eye contact is really good
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? Subject was his father, so he really knows him well. And it seems like Hansik usually looks his father's daily life carefully. There were a lot of examples of his father's behavior.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? yes! I can see his memo pad in his hand. And he memorized all the things he wanted to talk.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Yes. I can hear his voice clearly.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? Yes. In the opening, he shortly mentioned about the subject he will talk about. And at the conclusion, he clearly mentioned the reason why he admires his father.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. He prepared for the notes but he didn't use it because he memorized all the stuffs. And his eye contact was so good. He looked at every audiences' eyes.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? I think he doesn't many things to change. But his body gesture was so simple. He used almost the same gestures. But it's not bad, sometimes he uses other gestures too, and the gestures did not disturb concentration. Rather it looked natural.
8. What did you like about the presentation? First of all, he memorized all of the script. And I like his steady speed and volume. It was so good to hear and concentrate.
Speaking Feedback Date :April 23, 2016 Speaker:Hansik Yoon Evaluator: Miyoung Oh Title : Person who I admire
1. What strong points does the speaker have? steady speed, and eye contact is really good
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? Subject was his father, so he really knows him well. And it seems like Hansik usually looks his father's daily life carefully. There were a lot of examples of his father's behavior.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation? yes! I can see his memo pad in his hand. And he memorized all the things he wanted to talk.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly? Yes. I can hear his voice clearly.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion? Yes. In the opening, he shortly mentioned about the subject he will talk about. And at the conclusion, he clearly mentioned the reason why he admires his father.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact. He prepared for the notes but he didn't use it because he memorized all the stuffs. And his eye contact was so good. He looked at every audiences' eyes.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech? I think he doesn't many things to change. But his body gesture was so simple. He used almost the same gestures. But it's not bad, sometimes he uses other gestures too, and the gestures did not disturb concentration. Rather it looked natural.
8. What did you like about the presentation? First of all, he memorized all of the script. And I like his steady speed and volume. It was so good to hear and concentrate.
Evaluator: Jeonghee Lee
ReplyDeleteI really like your gestures and your calm speech. You also made good eye-contacts with the audiences. I think you are good at pausing and stressing properly. They made your speech more clear and audible. However, I think it would be better if you speak a little, little, little bit faster since you use many pausing, the presentation might sound too slow. You do have opening, body and closing but they are not signposted so it's quite hard to find out. Your opening with a proverb was also interesting. Well done!:D
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ReplyDeleteDate :April 23, 2016
Speaker:Hansik Yoon
Evaluator: Miyoung Oh
Title : Person who I admire
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
steady speed, and eye contact is really good
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
Subject was his father, so he really knows him well. And it seems like Hansik usually looks his father's daily life carefully. There were a lot of examples of his father's behavior.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
yes! I can see his memo pad in his hand. And he memorized all the things he wanted to talk.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes. I can hear his voice clearly.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes. In the opening, he shortly mentioned about the subject he will talk about. And at the conclusion, he clearly mentioned the reason why he admires his father.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
He prepared for the notes but he didn't use it because he memorized all the stuffs. And his eye contact was so good. He looked at every audiences' eyes.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
I think he doesn't many things to change. But his body gesture was so simple. He used almost the same gestures. But it's not bad, sometimes he uses other gestures too, and the gestures did not disturb concentration.
Rather it looked natural.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
First of all, he memorized all of the script. And I like his steady speed and volume. It was so good to hear and concentrate.
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate :April 23, 2016
Speaker:Hansik Yoon
Evaluator: Miyoung Oh
Title : Person who I admire
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
steady speed, and eye contact is really good
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
Subject was his father, so he really knows him well. And it seems like Hansik usually looks his father's daily life carefully. There were a lot of examples of his father's behavior.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
yes! I can see his memo pad in his hand. And he memorized all the things he wanted to talk.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Yes. I can hear his voice clearly.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
Yes. In the opening, he shortly mentioned about the subject he will talk about. And at the conclusion, he clearly mentioned the reason why he admires his father.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
He prepared for the notes but he didn't use it because he memorized all the stuffs. And his eye contact was so good. He looked at every audiences' eyes.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
I think he doesn't many things to change. But his body gesture was so simple. He used almost the same gestures. But it's not bad, sometimes he uses other gestures too, and the gestures did not disturb concentration.
Rather it looked natural.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
First of all, he memorized all of the script. And I like his steady speed and volume. It was so good to hear and concentrate.