https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=Cw8OkNqPlzk
I checked my presenation twice.
I think volume of my voice was okay or at least big enough for audiences.
The speed of speaking seemed bit fast but not that much in general.
However, even if I was the one who presented it, I could not hear some words from the presentation.
In additon, at first I did not rely on my manuscript, but as time passed by it seems like I had a tendency to check it frequently. Therefore, the number of and the interval of eyecontacting with the audiences decreased a lot, which gave me the impression that the presentor, I myself, was doing one-way communication lacking interaction with people who were listening to my presentation.
So if I do a presentation next time, I need to consider how fast I should speak, how much I should rely on the manuscript, and how frequently and long I should make eyecontact with audiences.
Lots of things to improve over the courses left.
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ReplyDeleteHello, this is Seo Bin Lee from your class. I first have say that your presentation was really excellent. You started with a visual material which led audiences' attention well. Delivery speed was pretty good, so audiences feel comfortable to hear you talking. Your voice is clear and enough for audiences. But I think if there were more interactions with audience, it will be better. Visual materials were well made and really helpful to understand your presentation. I also impressive with his love story as you did. It was so sweet. Lastly, I could see that you prepared a lot for this 5 minute presentation. Thank for your amazing presentation!
ReplyDeleteDate : 22 Apr 16
ReplyDeleteSpeaker: Shin, Gi-tae
Evaluator: Jeong, Woo-joon
Title : A person I admire
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
Loud and clear voice with neat visual aids helped me concentrate on your presentation a lot
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject?
The subject was straight forward.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
Well prepared presentation with confident voice and almost zero mumbling.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
Loud and clear.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
He opened with question followed by contents then body and end. Well organized.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
Good eye contacts with audience. It would have been even better if he read his cards a little less.
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
The same thing in number 6.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I liked how he opens his presentation. Starting recent issue and connect it with what he wants to talk about.
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ReplyDeleteDate : 4/22
Speaker: Gitae shin
Evaluator: Lee ji young 201502637 wed 56
Title : 홍정욱, the person I admire
1. What strong points does the speaker have?
Before he start the presentation, he talked about the election. which was done 3 days before at that time. It was good tactics using the recent issue for attract our attention. and also he made good power point. although it has not many contents in there, it was good supplment for his speech.
2. How well did the audience get to know the speech subject? she used video at the start of presentation, and it induce audiens' interest. also she used power point which was good supplement for her speech. It enhanced our concentration.
3. Did the speech reflect adequate preparation?
She rarely looked the note card, and seemed very confident.
she didn't nervous and also very calm. It made audience feel comfortable, and can focus on presentation.
4. Did the speaker talk clearly and audibly?
His speech tone and intonation was good. and the voice volume was also appropriate. We could hear his voice well. And also her message was delivered well.
5. Did the speech have a definite opening, body, and conclusion?
For opening, He talked about a recent issue, election. It was quite effective, because I also did election! and for the body he talked about the persons lifestory, achievement and why he admire him. He used index and introduced briefly about what to tell. It also very helpful to understand.
and for the conclusion, he mentioned two reasons why he admire him. (incessant effort and faith for her wife ) he explained why it is important in modern society. it made sense.
6. Please comment on the speaker’s use of notes/eye contact.
He often did eye contact, and it make me feel we are communicate. And rarely looked his notes. I think he practiced alot .
7. What could the speaker have done differently that would have improved the speech?
he mentioned about his biography, and it was interesting. because I also read that book! It is impressive and includes many interesting anecdotes. If he used these, it would be more fun and also meaningful for us.
8. What did you like about the presentation?
I think his presentation was good. Because his voice was powerful. And the flow was natural. I also impressed by his life, and achievement. Especially his incessant effort!